Review Detail of Sinbau in Dark Bound Heart

Good storytelling, pacing and introducing of the mc and important moments of the plot. There are a few grammatical issues but I don’t feel like it ruins the reading. Proof reading is an easy fix, I also wanted to suggest to split paragraphs to make it an easy reading. Nonetheless, the author is doing well with this novel and I can see potential- I look forward to seeing where this novel goes [img=recommend]