Review Detail of IINeeRoII in The Originals AU: Henrik Mikaelson (HIATUS)

Not a bad start but rather crude, but still keeps it interesting to a certain extent. On the other hand, what bothers me a lot are the author's notes. One moment you find yourself reading a section and the next there are author's notes at the beginning, middle and end of the chapter, which I see as totally unnecessary. One as a reader wants to achieve a certain degree of immensity when reading, but this is hindered by the author's constant tirade. As for the updates, they seem constant, which is a plus. The story is a bit meaningless in a few sentences occasionally, but you get what it means. The characters are quite AU, but still to some extent you manage to capture the essence of some. I feel that the description of the places where they are located and the context of the space is missing a bit, but is still ok. At the beginning the main character gets lost a bit but then in later chapters he resumes his role as the main character. I think of this as something necessary to give a background to the character, which is a plus. [GOOGLE TRANSLATE]