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TheGodlyFateFox
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2024-08-07 12:30

Good novel. Some gender inconsistencies, needs to be edited.

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I could read it tomorrow if I remember. Though I'm not good at writing my thoughts. I'm a casual reader, can't really comment if anything is wrong or not. Just if the grammar is off.

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