Review Detail of Upcoming_Region in One Piece: FIGHT FOR FREEDOM

Item: One Piece: FIGHT FOR FREEDOM
Rating: 5

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It's a very fast-paced book, but it has good potential. I would recommend just slowing it down and making it into more detailed chapters of the events. All in all, a good book so please dont drop it

One Piece: FIGHT FOR FREEDOM

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I realised as well. I'm trying to make it longer. It's also my first book so it is pretty hard!

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