Review Detail of Blanket in The Scourge: A Young Boy's Journey into Magic

I see a lot of potential in this story. Enough to continue reading to see where it goes. Plus I love chaotic neutral and evil neutral MC's. Writing quality 3.5/5: Writing quality gets my harshest score. I recommend either an editor or taking the time to proofread. 2/5 on spelling. There are frequent spelling errors and even in some chapter titles. Luckily its mostly typo's or autocorrects. 4/5 on grammar. It reads like its written by a native speaker and grammar is much more important than spelling as it directly affects the reading experience in my opinion. Updating stability 5/5: Keep it up. Most stories don't get readers until 100-200ch for three reasons. Readers like to binge read, they don't like to wait a week inbetween chapters and they don't like starting a novel for it to get dropped a couple weeks later. Author has the first two down. The 3rd aspect comes from trust and that only comes with time and 100s of chapters released. consistently. Story development 5/5: Original story, no info dumps, kind of reminds me of tales of herding gods how the MC learns from multiple very different masters who also double as his parents. Author also does foreshadowing right, doesn't give out too much information too early to spoil the punchline. The theatrics is a nice touch too. ALSO NO INFO DUMPS. My only recommendation would be less drama and more tragedy. My only complaint is that the dryads are borderline deux ex machina, not quite but almost. Character design 5/5: Kind of early for this one. There are quite a few unique characters. I can't put a finger on a singular antagonist or protagonist, almost like MC is his own antagonist, that or the world itself, which stays true to the chaotic nature of the novel. I thought it was weird how early life the novel starts and how mature the MC and his friends are, but that gets explained for the most part. Looking forward to see future character growth. World building: 5/5 No info dumps. There is just enough dialogue to explain where they are and their surroundings. And thats all the readers really need at this point in the stiry. My recommendation is to use more descriptions to better build the world in the mind of the reader. As the setting might be clear to the author but us readers we can only go based on the words used to describe the setting. Also be shameless and write your own review already author. A lot of people skip stories without any reviews.