Nice try! But still needs some work... The story of Nova is captivating and filled with suspenseful twists and turns. However, the author's lack of attention to spelling and grammar detracts from the overall experience. Encouraging the author to review and edit their chapters before posting will enhance the quality of the story and make it more enjoyable for readers. A little extra effort in editing can go a long way in creating a polished and professional final product :)
Zefyr
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me gustaZefyr:That's what I thought, too. For now, i'm writing some drafts and will post after a few days when i'm sure it'll make a difference.
Zefyr:I don't really want a harem. Most probably i'll focus on a single one.
RainbowBeheader:i do not read harem so when u decide for sure what do u want, can u answer me?
RainbowBeheader:i do not read harem so when u decide for sure what do u want, can u answer me?