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These are my thoughts until chapter 20, do keep this in mind, I don't read FL novels, so I'm not familiar with how these stories usually go. So for the story, I feel like not too much attention was brought to world building in those 20 chaps, but although it wasn't much, what is shown is interesting so far. Now for the characters, the way they talk and interact with each other is great, it's all realistic and witty, the way you write events is also great, you know how to keep the tension, so excellent quality writing there, Update stability is not the usual one chapter everyday, the author takes a few days from one chapter to the next, but the quality of the chapters make up for it so it's fine. The characters are designed well so no complaints, although I might've missed it, but descriptions of how they look in detail is missed, same with locations and such. Now for the plot, the FL, although its interesting why she is acting that way, being so clingy and all that, but we aren't given enough reason to care for her, she is too bratty, clueless, naïve and stupid, I get it, it was all by design, she was a sheltered princess after all, but still, she is annoying in these 20 chaps, hopefully her growth gets her to become a proper human. The ML is likeable, as well as the other characters introduced in the camp, so yeah, I don't have much else to say here, except that their relationship is interesting so far.

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The longest review I had ever have... thanks mate