Review Detail of NotNecro in The Slumbering Underworld

I don't normally read stories like this, but I wasn't afraid of giving it a try. This story has very good writing quality and immerses you in the scenes that the writer wants to express. Personally, I think that the start of this book just sprung out from nowhere, and no hate to the author, but the pacing of the story was going at lightspeed. This doesn't make the book any less bad, but you should slow the story down by adding more details of the character's thoughts, adding some slight comedic sentences and maybe including POVs of other characters and their thought process over the scene. Idk, just an idea. Overall, I think you are an underrated writer, and you should keep up the work :)