Review Detail of Avidfan in A life outside the city

Story is between Survival and Hunger Games (Not yet. That the impression I got at the very first). I really like the interaction between the MC and his beloved at Chapter 10. Chapter 10 is surprising smooth and is well paced. It is better than the earlier chapters. I'd suggest author leaves a paragraph after every 5 lines, like in Chapter 10 which is top notch in writing skills. Keep up the good job!