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Jhaydun
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Firstly, I am confused about why the main character needed to be in Korea, given an English name, and other characters from there had English names as well. It seems the setting of Korea was purely done for the sake of it, as the characters never really showed any different mannerisms or anything associated with Koreans in the first few chapters, at least. The writing is better than the majority of novels on this platform, but there are still occasional punctuation errors. The author clearly thinks about where the story is headed. It is a generic isekai start, but I feel the cliches will slowly drift away as the author tells their unique story. The characters seem likeable and thought-out, but I would need to read more to find out. The problem with many novels here is that they don't show but tell us what is happening. The author splits this about fifty-fifty, which is okay, but more descriptions of the world around the characters would breathe more life into the story. I like it and would read it if I had more time. Definitely give this a read if you can because I have a feeling it'll be a good ride.

Villain of Negressea

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Hai, The mention of korea was just for the sake of it. NO Real connection, even the city name was something I created and it doesn't exist in reality in korea. And you're correct, this story will take a big turn from and is going to take everyone by surprise. The world will unfold as the story progress since I didn't want my reader to feel like the info was being dumped on them. And last I want to thank you that you took out you time and reviewed my work.

Jhaydun
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I'm looking forward to it 😍

Vaiself:Hai, The mention of korea was just for the sake of it. NO Real connection, even the city name was something I created and it doesn't exist in reality in korea. And you're correct, this story will take a big turn from and is going to take everyone by surprise. The world will unfold as the story progress since I didn't want my reader to feel like the info was being dumped on them. And last I want to thank you that you took out you time and reviewed my work.