Character is good, idk abt update stab. World background is just too much, more like info dump for me (readers). Almost every chapt that the mc feels sus abt something, the mc would suddenly shrug it off and thinks it might just be him overthinking or some unreasonable reason brought by the author. My recent encounter of this is ch 124 "Although he failed to inspect the man, he had no intention to chase him. He probably grinned because he felt like it and Zio thought he was too paranoid and worried because the new year's night when the demon would announce themselves to the world was a few days away.". Author forcing mc to be smart for mc to benefit from something like getting connections to ppl for mc to take advantage of them, then moments later acts stupid and shrug off things that are suspicious to everyone's naked eye. The planned plot is good, I'm give you that. The only thing is some turn of events are force coz author seemed unable to find a way to make the events natural. (most noticeable is events like what I mentioned earlier where MCs iq becomes questionable because—acted smart, then later plain stupid.) I think it's not only me who noticed this but I didn't see anyone pointing this out which made me question WHY. I don't hate the book, but I hope for it to be fixed. I'll be reading more and see more of Author's work development.
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