First off, I do recommend this book. I really like the way this story has progressed with its World building, and writing vocabulary. It has a really cool concept, and I immediately thought of something like Pokemon. One small issue, that would really help your book, is to use Grammarly or any browser extension that goes over and fixes the little grammar mistakes that you make, and creates a fluid reading experience for the reader. Other than that, I would love to see how this story progresses.
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