Overall a well written story. Hard to tell you're not a native English speaker, it flows and reads great in English. The MC is interesting and the way he uses his powers in creative. Also the character interactions are nice, don't seem forced and they have really good back and forth dialogue. It's tough to gleam more than that from 3 chapters but it's a great start so far. Thanks for the story and I hope you keep writing.
KindaWeirdChampBro
Liked it!
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