The concept of the story is quite good, just very confusing in many places, his heroism is very annoying in this story.... He is a typical hero mc who wants to save the world without daring to pull anyone's hair out.... He is often a jerk and puts himself in life threatening situations just to save a life where he doesn't even know if the person is good or evil.... And don't even get me started on his weird system and the other voices that sometimes talk about him from a bird's eye view from nowhere.... (I'll give it 3 stars now, even though I'd honestly like to give it less, at least I could read the story well sometimes, and that would be unfair when i would give it less...)
Green0034
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me gustaGreen0034:First of all, thanks for the review, since I am new to writing it is still difficult to do some things, but I will try to improve and explain more about the system and stuff.
Yeah how do you read this in English it’s showing up say it’s English but it’s not so I can use the translate functio n
Green0034:First of all, thanks for the review, since I am new to writing it is still difficult to do some things, but I will try to improve and explain more about the system and stuff.
Green0034:First of all, thanks for the review, since I am new to writing it is still difficult to do some things, but I will try to improve and explain more about the system and stuff.
what if you are using the app how do you change it from translating from English to English, I want it to say translate from Spanish to english
Bubbbs:Download google translate browser extension