Review Detail of mygrammarsucks in Great Voyage: Invincible From the Era of Rocks

Item: Great Voyage: Invincible From the Era of Rocks
Rating: 3.6

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mygrammarsucksLv41yrmygrammarsucks

I saw this on mtl you really make it more readable but there's still a couple of mistake and some hard to read parts of the novel

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AzraelFrost1Lv1AzraelFrost1

Original?????

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MrSimoLv13MrSimo

can you make what you j7st wrote more readable. because I almost had stroke deciphering that paragraph.

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