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If you want to read a good dc fanfic with good quality writing and great story telling skills then you are in the wrong place. The spelling and grammar are okay but the author just doesn’t know how to write a story. Instead he just throws whatever his thoughts are into the story with no narration, or any kind of actual structure. He just seems to think that just saying what he wants to happen exactly as it happens in his mind somehow makes this make sense. I’ve lost multiple brain cells while reading this. Even if for some magical reason the author did suddenly gain the ability to use actually decent structuring it would still be a basic wish fulfillment story with no reasoning and no explanations. Sorry for the long review. Just felt like making this because I wanted to rant. Thank you for obliging me.

In DC with the ability’s of rainbow six operators

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