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I found it interesting! but the paragraphs are way too long hahaaha it ends up tiring Try to break them, no need to rewrite them. just split those long paragraphs into 3 or 4 small ones

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Alaafin: Irunmole

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Thank you very much for the review, i would work on it 🙏🏾