Writing Quality 5* Updating Stability 4* Story Development 3* (Story pace is really really slow, and it usually takes 2-3 chapters for a concrete plot point to be established) Character Design 5* World Background 3* (Author has messed up the canon on several occasions and has narrowly avoided criticism for it because it’s “AU”, not much for worldbuilding but what is there is pretty good)
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me gustahoneyseeto_03:Thanks for your honest review. Hehe, I knew my plot development was bad but I am trying to make it smoother. Sorry bout that.