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Review Detail of therealet in Twilight: A Transmigration Story

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therealet
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Writing Quality 5* Updating Stability 4* Story Development 3* (Story pace is really really slow, and it usually takes 2-3 chapters for a concrete plot point to be established) Character Design 5* World Background 3* (Author has messed up the canon on several occasions and has narrowly avoided criticism for it because it’s “AU”, not much for worldbuilding but what is there is pretty good)

Twilight: A Transmigration Story

honeyseeto_03

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honeyseeto_03
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Thanks for your honest review. Hehe, I knew my plot development was bad but I am trying to make it smoother. Sorry bout that.

therealet
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Forgot to mention that I nevertheless enjoy the story a lot, kutgw.

honeyseeto_03:Thanks for your honest review. Hehe, I knew my plot development was bad but I am trying to make it smoother. Sorry bout that.