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Jorge_Revete
Jorge_ReveteLv41yr
2023-08-10 12:18

This is one of the Best storie i read recently, and i love it.

Dragon Ball- Zarbon's adventure

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PettiaMius_6689
PettiaMius_6689Lv4

drop this story and I'll drop your soul in the lake of gulags😊

1yr

Chaddts
ChaddtsLv1

This is very well written, and is sight for sore eyes as most fanfictions are utter garbage in here. The character is great, and isn't some trauma victim, nor is he some Uber assassin who transmigrated just a normal guy who is relatable being thrust into a chaotic situation, and making the best of it. My only issue is the overly description style of writing. We have two entire LONG paragraphs detailing frieza's appearance, followed by another for the ship itself. While descriptions are fine this is over done. Another issue revolves around the same concept of being over-done. This come into play by the sudden P.O.V shifts that delve far too deep into the emotional feeling the characters have, every, single, time they speak. Never is it just a dialogue. It also has an entire paragraph of supplementary text following each sentence spoken by someone. This makes the story move very slowly and bogs it down in useless minutia, that can be gleamed much better and more naturally through context.

1yr
DrowsyHobo
DrowsyHoboLv12

So far it's good. Hopefully it doesn't get dropped.

1yr
ShadowMonarch21
ShadowMonarch21Lv5

unique concept, great story, smart mc and great powers.

1yr
Jasperbloodwatch
JasperbloodwatchLv3

I am loving the story so far and great job In regards to the characters with New interesting situations than just a clone copy of dragon ball.

1yr
Set_Apart
Set_ApartLv3

So far I really like it. It starts off rough like every book but as it progresses it gets better. Mc is likable unlike most of the main characters on Webnovel. Seems like it will be a really great fic if the author doesn’t mess it up

1yr
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