Review Detail of flace in HP: War Game

This is only up to chapter 5 however the story is already looking very promising. The author approaches the world of harry potter in such a unique way that it feels like a new world and distinct from the other harry potter fanfics. Updates have been regular but not sure for the future. The main character isn't op or anything (maybe in the future) but he seems to show leadership skills as well as being someone that isn't whiney or a baby. he doesn't hesitate and thinks through things realistically he may be a bit crazy which would make for a fun story hopefully this continue throughout the novel. As for the other characters we can defenitly see their a bit of their character simply through the introduction and how they speak but needs to be developed but there has only been 5 chapters and building up the main character would be a better play and these current characters may not be important for the story. Writing quality is good and doesn't seem to be any problems in reading. Seeing as there is a connection to Cuthulu or maybe it was just a joke but if it wasn't would be cool to see some crazy weird horror spells to intertwine with the mc's insanity would make him more unique. TL:DR Unique story, good mc, bright future would recommend. Sorry it was long but keep it up author