i would say the novel has good potential but author stretching the novel and has so many realms and those realms are also complicated and messed and i mainly don't like the old man who is supporting the mc like he is worst draw back of these novel other than slow pacing and complex realms.Also its best if the author have just choosen mortal , immortal and god realm like simply but now there 7 realms where mc becomes strong in the current realm and become a weakest person in the next above realm and the same repitition for seven whole times.
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me gustaThanks for the feedback! I do realize that I made too many realms, of course that was way after I started writing, and so I didn't feel like changing anything. Of course, I do have plans for the old man, so no need to worry about that. As for the amount of chapters, I did the math and do not plan to write more than 4,000 chapters to finish this, which I believe should be enough. If you want a better and more balanced power system (In my opinion) go check out my other book, Ascending Mortal Cultivator. While it may be paused right now, I don't plan on dropping it and will probably start on it again next year. Anyways, thanks for the review, I haven't gotten one in a long time lol.
DaoistWenMing:Thanks for the feedback! I do realize that I made too many realms, of course that was way after I started writing, and so I didn't feel like changing anything. Of course, I do have plans for the old man, so no need to worry about that. As for the amount of chapters, I did the math and do not plan to write more than 4,000 chapters to finish this, which I believe should be enough. If you want a better and more balanced power system (In my opinion) go check out my other book, Ascending Mortal Cultivator. While it may be paused right now, I don't plan on dropping it and will probably start on it again next year. Anyways, thanks for the review, I haven't gotten one in a long time lol.