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Review Detail of DaoistWenMing in Heaven's Tribulation

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DaoistWenMing
DaoistWenMingAutor8mthDaoistWenMing

Shameless author here giving myself 5 stars (Lets be honest, who would give themselves less than 5 stars unless idk) Anyways, here's my analysis of my very first novel; Grammar, punctuation, and use of clever language I would say is my forte. (Please do point out any mistakes if you see then though) I would say the first 60 chapters or so could have been better and used a bit more polishing. However this is my first novel (Please don't kill me) Also, I'm dumb, so leave more reviews cuz I read all of them. (I do wish to improve my writing skills)

Heaven's Tribulation

DaoistWenMing

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DaoistWenMing
DaoistWenMingAutorDaoistWenMing

Operation Revision is underway! I will slowly but surely go back to my earlier chapters and revise them, using the experience I gained to patch up the holes. Any chapter that I have revised will be stated at the bottom in author's thoughts.

VampirePrince
VampirePrinceLv14VampirePrince

i like it so far , good work

Harsh_Kushwaha_6049
Harsh_Kushwaha_6049Lv3Harsh_Kushwaha_6049

ntr? yuri? long separations(like 100 chps)?

DaoistWenMing:Operation Revision is underway! I will slowly but surely go back to my earlier chapters and revise them, using the experience I gained to patch up the holes. Any chapter that I have revised will be stated at the bottom in author's thoughts.