Review Detail of AllFatherOmnis in Erian of Unity

Hello, this is the author. In case someone doesn't understand the plot, or the political system, Spherical Energy or others. Today I released the 5 Auxiliary Volume Chapter, where you can understand a little bit the world of the Era. As for the Main Story itself. If any of you would take the trouble to read it. I would ask if you would write a completely objective and honest review here. I just want to get better at novels, and above all, I don't want to drag my world in the wrong direction. I don't delete reviews, I'm happy for any advice or opinion. I think it's good but I'm an author after all. Otherwise, have a nice rest of the day. [img=recommend]