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Grim999
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I would appreciate an review, I honestly don't know if where the story is going is good or not...as I said, I want to become an author, and I am learning from this fiction, but I would appreciate it if you could tell me if I am doing well or not, and if not where should I improve... English is not my first language, it's my 4th, because of that I know there are some grammatical mistakes and I apologize...

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Vishisht_Magan
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My guy this story is amazing, don't drop it please, you are doing great, i love it, you will become a great author, please just don't drop the story, i really want to know more about Snape's impact on this world, and if you turn this into a series, then let me tell you, your world building is amazing, please please please dont drop it