Review Detail of ManasCiel in Cursed Dark Eyes
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WQ is good. Other stuff is ok. Only read 3 chapters because it left me unsatisfied at every plot point. And the age of the mc is confusing, at points it describes him like he is really old like beginning of humanity old, and then he acts like a child in decision making. He has power but doesn’t use it. He is strong but gets put in bad situations that make you go: “hmm, if he is this strong, how did he get to the point he needs others’ help to do anything?”. Just feels kind of forced. So ya, I’m done with this. (Ps. Author, you should make a synopsis.)
Cursed Dark Eyes
FruitMonkey
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since this is your first I think you wrote it professionally except the bad pacing you have alot of potential author
FruitMonkey:Thank you for your feedback regardless! I hope you can consider reading the novel in the future again once I add more chapters!
Hi, thank you so much for your feedback. For your questions, most of them are answered further along the part since the story is just beginning. I’ve been trying to throw in some hints in the chapters itself, but this is my first time writing. I’ll take into account what you said and do some revising!
Thank you for your feedback regardless! I hope you can consider reading the novel in the future again once I add more chapters!
ManasCiel:I meant to add an extra line saying: “It isn’t bad, just not my cup of tea. It is worth a try atleast.”
FruitMonkey:Thank you for your feedback regardless! I hope you can consider reading the novel in the future again once I add more chapters!
Dookie_Man:since this is your first I think you wrote it professionally except the bad pacing you have alot of potential author