Review Detail of funkiller_562 in The Duke's Beloved Rose

Keeper your book is beautiful, the synopsis, the characters, their design and world building but... Your book cover is not appetizing to the readers. Mature readers would think it's a child writing it when the book is actually pretty good. The premise is pretty cliché but it deviated after the her rebirth and I appreciate that. The length of paragraphs is adequate but there are some scenes that I would appreciate if you described them better. They didn't form properly in my mind and it was much of a hassle to imagine what exactly was going on. Especially referring to her second meeting with the Duke. Other than that, really good writing.