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Zuesofolypus
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This is messed up in many ways, 1st your grammer is terrible it is not Goku would got to school it is Goku went to school, then you are just rushing the story as well.

What if goku was in highschool dxd

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Greater_Oat
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I'm sorry that my grammar is shit is just that my autocorrect feature is working properly for the last week. I'll try to get it fixed before I release the next chapter

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also I'm not trying to into depth with everything or I'd be touring myself also I went like 3 episode in 12 chapters then like 6 chapter for 2 episode. I am rushing because I'm not trying to spend ten chapter on one episode

haremphobic
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You just suck at writing😂

Greater_Oat:also I'm not trying to into depth with everything or I'd be touring myself also I went like 3 episode in 12 chapters then like 6 chapter for 2 episode. I am rushing because I'm not trying to spend ten chapter on one episode
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Or maybe I have a life or get this. This may boggle you even more the writing gets better

haremphobic:You just suck at writing😂