This is a nice story. I got drown reading it and can't wait to see how Mythel and Rex' story unfolds. But you should consider rewriting your synopsis. It is too long! You title, cover and synopsis are what attracts a reader first to your book. It should not be too short like a paragraph or two. It should not be two long, like more than 4-6 paragraphs...
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