Review Detail of LazyReaderAlways in Isekai Rollback

I am the author here. I hope maybe one day my novel will be worthy of the 5 stars that I have given to it. This is my first novel. I will deeply appreciate constructive reviews and comments. But I hope you guys will give proper reasons for why you do/do not like it. I will try to do my best in making this a good novel. Also, any advice will be appreciated. Thank you for reading this.