Review Detail of Crow_Fog in Havilah's reign of terror

The story is great. Can develop in many ways, i.e., it has great potential. Author you're doing a great job. It's just that your characters do not have depth and your grammar is umm... a little weak. I'm sorry if it felt bad. But if you want to improve, I think you should write small essays on a subject. use Grammarly or word tune, though i never used either so I am really qualified to give this advice to you. But just don't stop. You can do it. You can tell your story to the world.