The Story is pretty well thought out, while there are some obvious forced plot points, its a really enjoyable read! How the various DC characters are portrayed is pretty true to canon & well done. the interactions between the various different individuals is well played out & feels quite organic & normal. Although it does has its downs such as a few personal pet peeves of mine, It was quite solid. (I also am not really sure on what to think of the new ‘power’ she got. Its a little Too angst for my tastes) the world even actually feels threateningly huge in a sense. Unlike many other Dc fics where the mc’s treat the dc world as their personal playground. Mc isn’t op really, but she’s also far from weak. I like how they incorporated the scientist/inventor background into it as well, while I kind of wish she could get stronger personally without the use of technology, its still not unwelcomed. Although, it mostly focuses on Earth & young justice. I do hope the world is explored a bit more though, theres so much to explore in the DC verse for it to not be explored a bit. As for The story development so far. its quite slow, but, it makes up for it through sheer quality and actually taking time to flesh out scenarios. Anyways, I enjoyed the read, it was phenomenally well written. I hope to see more! Thanks for the story, author! (Here, have a supergirl.)
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