Review Detail of DaOisT_ in Young again the world of Pokemon

Well, what to say. I am something of a wannabe writer. I am trying to finally stick to something and hopefully get at least somewhere with this work. I am not promising anything with this work but I really want to try write something long term. Not really for anybody but myself. I think this story is somewhat decent, at least the way which it will go. [Which even I properly dont know.] I am just winging it to be honest, I don't even have draft of anything, barring a few plot points. To be expected this is somewhat of a wish fullfilment fic, my take on the pokemon world, and a splash of my measly creativity. So please, dont expect miracles, I take every bit of critisim and try to respond to everybody,[if someone even reads this...] And through this review I found out that the word somewhat is my new favorite word.