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Hello there you book , I give it 10 of 10 one of the best reads out there but I am criticizing your writing it's fine as I just wish u added enhanced senses to his dragon repertoire so he could be like an inuzuka who have great sense of smell and it's not out of the ordinary in fairy tails dragon slayer have smell so good they can track ppl kilometers away without training and over water , so wished u added it and it feels the mc is progressing slowly if u are comparing him with itachi well I am not blaming u bc u are judging based on the manga and anime but if u go to the novels which is canon , itachi was already a jonin level ninja at 8yrs old and never really participated in chunin exams bc his jonin sensei was jealous of him until he was recommended by the hokage and danzo to take the exams where he got the second fastest time to arrive at the tower , first being Minato and he only took that much time bc he was looking for ppl to try his sharingan on and Itachi was immediately promoted again just with 6 months, so your mc should be at least Jonin level ninja by time he is 10 , elite jonin 12 , kage level by the time he is 15 yrs , I am low balling bc itachi was estimated to be kage level by time he was 13 yrs old even b4 the mangekou sharingan , from the statement itachi and shishui are strongest members of the Uchiha clan which includes fugaki who was strong enough to be a hokage candidate so yeah nice novel pls continue

Reincarnating into Naruto’s world because of bad luck

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