it as and ok start and good story development then again i only read 9 chapter. i think it could use more meta knowledge use in the story for example go back to record ho-ho fly over ash see if he left him a feather he didn't know and use the feather to get a legendary. for example wait for the mewtwo movie clone ho-ho or it's a legend that said that ho-ho feather can bring a pokemon from the dead like the eevee evolution trio that become legendary dogs. he could have a sylveon that die fighting or something gets revive becoming a new legend of a fairy dog with area heal that can even revive the recent dead pokemon and can beat any dragon it faces.
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