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its good and all but I have one problem I have been reading a older pokemon FF again and I noticed that there are alot of similarities between the two such as the pokemon at the start both a bulbasaur and shiny magicarp the only difference is he doesn't have a chimchar.Two the exact same scenario happens with officer Jenny again it could be a coincidence alot of things are different it's just I felt that these specific thing were to close it cloud be it was made that way because it was a pretty simple interaction and both pokemon are popular I just don't like people stealing other peoples things
I transmigrated in Pokemon
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I literally just started reading the other FF(it's journey towards greatness if you want to see for yourself) and he got to the pewter city gym the same thing happened a very similar scenario bulbasaur came defeated geodude and evolved even the way it fainted was similar with bulbasaur using vine whip trapping the beating and evolving I just hope isn't stealing ideas I will keep reading to see if it is or not and if it isn't sorry for ranting over nothing and being paranoid
cockroach1523:I literally just started reading the other FF(it's journey towards greatness if you want to see for yourself) and he got to the pewter city gym the same thing happened a very similar scenario bulbasaur came defeated geodude and evolved even the way it fainted was similar with bulbasaur using vine whip trapping the beating and evolving I just hope isn't stealing ideas I will keep reading to see if it is or not and if it isn't sorry for ranting over nothing and being paranoid
You're right. Actually, it was this FF that got me to write a FF of my own. However, you forgot how the God helped him in the beginning, how he got some OP origin energy and whatnot. Also, my MC isn't an old man who died but a teenager transmigrator. Not to mention, the system; his system has quests and gives him money yet mine is more like a status borad with a additional ability to let him decide what kind move his Pokemon should learn when they level up or evolve. As for the story itself, like I said, it as indeed inspired by journey towards greatness. Therefore, in the early chapters I kinda imitated it. Still, it was only at the easily chapters. Afterwards, I found my one pocket and it began writing my own plot. I hope, I clarified myself.
that's good to know and I know that he isn't a old man but still the similarities were there so I just guessed but I'm happy that it wasn't what I guessed
TheMilflover:You're right. Actually, it was this FF that got me to write a FF of my own. However, you forgot how the God helped him in the beginning, how he got some OP origin energy and whatnot. Also, my MC isn't an old man who died but a teenager transmigrator. Not to mention, the system; his system has quests and gives him money yet mine is more like a status borad with a additional ability to let him decide what kind move his Pokemon should learn when they level up or evolve. As for the story itself, like I said, it as indeed inspired by journey towards greatness. Therefore, in the early chapters I kinda imitated it. Still, it was only at the easily chapters. Afterwards, I found my one pocket and it began writing my own plot. I hope, I clarified myself.