The story is really great, i liked almost everything about the girl hazel but if you could add some more expense and add some more character into the story it will be great and also writing is different and unique but a bit more detailing will spark up the novel! you are doing amazing! please keep improving and dont give up i am going to read this till end!
Ebere_Juliet
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