Review Detail of Andy_Humphrey in You Might Die If I Cast My Healing Spell

in future add less details. you're begging chapters with details about classes and dpint calculated math on theoretical damage which has no place in stories. it's fine to expand a little bit but don't waste an entire chapter on it. I'm literally skipping whole chapters at this point bc it's useless info toward the overall story. background, bad ass fight scenes, funny, sad happy, depressing, personal moments to make it feel real. these are what's needed. if you can't supply enough don't write. adding word fillers is poor authorism