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Review Detail of Supreme_Leader in Wakanda Forever

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The story itself isn't bad but... The writing in the 1st person POV isn't good. Past tense and present tense are mixed up where they shouldn't be. It made me question if the author really is a native English speaker, from the US, like they stated in the synopsis. (Their region on the Webnovel app definitely isn't set as the US. But it can be changed so...) But then the third person writings aren't actually bad. There aren't any obvious tense mixups. There are typos and forgetting the apostrophes etc but those can be overlooked.

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