Item: Help! The Seductive Villain Chases Me Everyday
Rating: 3.2

EmpressAziaLv21yr

2023-08-30 11:51

HONEST REVIEW AHEAD!!!(might contain spoiler details)Honestly, I read this book with high expectations for the plot and ending. The start of the story was delivered well, but in the later chapter especially the ending (although happy ending) was delivered on rush resulting for the lack of story details that the author should include to make it more interesting. It's like the author squeezes too many information in the ending episodes so that the book can end with few episodes. Some information also doesn't make sense nor connect with the earlier chapters. For example, in the earlier episode it was told that Shin Ran has a twin brother, yet in the ending part when it turns out that she was the missing daughter of Mrs. Wang, the CCTV footage, and the picture where Old Master Shin picked her in the seaside when she was a baby doesn't mentioned that she was with or has a twin brother. The revelations are squeezed into few chapters and the details sucks. Readers will end up wondering what happen to the E-sports group that she invested?, what happen to the Shin family?, her Assistant (who was never mentioned again)? The show they participated? Their wedding? The netizens reaction when they found out that she's the missing real heir of Wen or did her biological parent announced her? and such . The story line was written with lack or details, information, and poor plot. I've been reading novels for so long, although I like the thought of the story but it wasn't delivered properly. It's like the story was delivered from a slow paced then suddenly things became rushed in the end. All in all, it was a good read. Keep up the good work and more improvements to come!

Help! The Seductive Villain Chases Me Everyday

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