Review Detail of GaZe_Zero in The Darkness of Exusiai

It’s good and well written but it has issues in describing characters and the reasons for why OC does what she does. Also another issue that is more opinion based is that it’s generally very edgy, Rwby doesn’t do really good with OP edgy characters in it as everyone has a general power limit/personality. Don’t get me wrong it can workout but you basically have an really edgy mc who does things for no real reason other than having a bad upbringing. Even then her powers just barely fit the limit in RWBY. Still a ok story though and I appreciate it, best of luck on writing.