Review Detail of Wahyu_Dwi_S in I'll Give You a Large Family

Item: I'll Give You a Large Family
Rating: 2.2

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The more you read, the more confused you become. I don't have a problem with crossovers, but how can you combine material peak with saint seiya and SMNT/MT in my opinion it's too forced if matreil peak is combined with 3 worlds it's not very suitable.

I'll Give You a Large Family

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and you make too many mysteries .... in the first world the mystery of his birth and about his power he did not know and you added another mystery in the 2nd world.. oh and also what happened during his meeting with iriana the explanation was too short (1 chapter that's only 10% of that chapter) compared to the sex scene with 2 unclear women with 3 more chapters

1yr

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