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2022-06-25 03:10

Ok, since there are only 4 chapters currently... I can't say much, except the few grammar errors that I found which could easily be edited and the para-phrasing that could be improved... The story is just awesome! A await to see how the story goes in the later chapters!

School Princess is a Mafia Leader

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I really enjoy the way the story is written, I smiled readfinh about the little sister... Characters have been beautifully described. Highly recommend! Not a book you want to pass up馃敟

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