Review Detail of Black_Dragongod in I'm on TV! (Showbiz SI)

I like it so far (chap 15), it's a nice Story, though the progression is quite fast, it has good grammar and good characters.....the negativ points (for me) are, that scene-/time-breaks always happen without warning and signs, which is quite jarring and it somehow irks me quite a bit that we don't get any pov Switches or/for reactions to the movies, it's something I love and look foreward in every showbiz/hollywood story, but it isn't even mentioned here, only the box office numbers are shown.