Review Detail of One_Forever in Life: An Adventure Of Reality

The only thing I lack is good vocabulary. So my story doesn't have hard lines. You will be able to know the theme of story if you look at the tags. But it is a new story, not a fanfiction. Another thing, I will give some space (special chapters) to important characters which is new. Martial arts fans gonna like it because it will have fight scenes in a detailed manner. I believe in balance between light and dark which is an important part of story. You guys must have understood the theme of story. Thanks! please support me!