Review Detail of Gumbus in Mars aflame

Shameless author review / extra synopsis. This is my first ever fanfic and writing endeavor so I'm expecting it to be trash but I'm going to try my best to make it not that. This is a young justice DC fanfic self insert as a martian, there's a ton of way's this story can go and I would love all the feedback I can get! Thanks everyone who checks out the story!