Review Detail of ThePotatoKing in Inside a novel as the Hero's useless brother

Okay, amazing story so far. At the start, it was a little frustrating to see the cliche scenes of the MC getting ridiculed for no reason by the useless guild, but the more I read the more I realised that not everything was as simple as it looked on the surface. The author is really good at manipulating your opinions about the characters. You can't help but hate the guts of those who are supposed to be enemies and love the ones that are friends. Once I got hooked to the story I didn't even realise when I ran out of chapters to read. I am going to be waiting for regular updates author!! The only complaint I have is that the first 2-3 chapters are not up to par in quality with the rest of the book. I think the author can spend some time to rework them and polish it up a bit. Also please please don't use double quotation marks for thoughts.