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Primordial Vampire God System
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a big factor... idk, i can tell u that there will be lots of interaction between them, but those interaction will be more along the lines of discussions abt their next plans.
Homelander69:is romance Big factor in story cus i don't like romance in this type of violent novel
can you write more chapters on the other novel, I was following that from the start and I don't like the fact that because of a new novel, it started getting less updated.
SleepDeprivedSloth:a big factor... idk, i can tell u that there will be lots of interaction between them, but those interaction will be more along the lines of discussions abt their next plans.
You should have added another tag there. You know, romance doesn't fit in my opinion in a novel of kingdom building and war. Because all is Fair in Love and War(random people say), and betrayal(or other similiar things) will happen there. If you want to use it for character development, that's fine. Also some say this mc is naive, and you know how sneaky people take advantage of that. At least add romance when he's strong or understands a little with a woman who loves him sincerely or how he avoids women who just want to take advantage of him. Btw the tag added is a dark tag(perhaps, I don't know many such tags). Sorry for the words, Author. This is just something that sticks in my head by looking at novels of the type of Kingdom Building and War with the tag of romance.
SleepDeprivedSloth:a big factor... idk, i can tell u that there will be lots of interaction between them, but those interaction will be more along the lines of discussions abt their next plans.
