Review Detail of HeyIAmNikki in First Stygian Diviner:Apocalypse

Started of really strong in every field, but the writing quality went down rather quickly. Im at chapter 24 now and since some chapters the author just switched from past in one paragraph to present in the next and they also just often use question or exclamation parks at the wrong spots, put eitger a space between the end of tge sentence and the Punctuation mark or put no punctuation mark at all, but still a space. Some sentences also just dont make any sense. I really hooe this gets better as the story progresses. But now to the good parts, the charcter building, world building and everything is really good and got me really hooked on the story. So if those ggrammar mistaked and all weren't there, then it would be nearlx perfect. But i think i makr it seem a bit worse than it actually is, because I have definetely seen worse. I would definetely recommend this story tho