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me gustaI mean thanks. I feel like a story like that is sometimes too predictable. Your criticism of the story isn't really a criticism as it is part of the story development where the MC turned into a human. Not everyone will want to stay in a form that they are not used to, maybe only you I guess. Go write your own story, of course not for free, but I doubt a lot of people will buy it.
UndeadBeing:You’re the only one buddy, I’m not writing a novel, for the one person who likes that particular type, for free.
Nilo_A:He gains a human form to blend in temporarily, it's not permanent. Try to be less impatient
How do you like a novel that’s advertised as non-human but he has a human form? That’s the dumbest plot ever, do you also like your romance novels to have no romance? Or maybe you like your transmigration novels to have no transmigration? See how stupid that sounds? If you make a non-human mc and advertise it as such, you keep it non-human.
YellowNarwhale:What’s wrong with MC turn human? I am more interested if he turn back into human. Tell me if it is permanent down the line. I’ll give it a read then.
All that sounds quite good not gonna lie. Tbh, the romance without romance is call of the night. Reincarnation without reincarnation is omniscient first person point of view and one other that I forgot the name of, and also you can't forget the Lord of the Mystery, if you know, you know. I can't help but say you are quite brilliant, maybe make some novel with these concepts. I'll certainly read it.
UndeadBeing:How do you like a novel that’s advertised as non-human but he has a human form? That’s the dumbest plot ever, do you also like your romance novels to have no romance? Or maybe you like your transmigration novels to have no transmigration? See how stupid that sounds? If you make a non-human mc and advertise it as such, you keep it non-human.
You’re the only one buddy, I’m not writing a novel, for the one person who likes that particular type, for free.
YellowNarwhale:All that sounds quite good not gonna lie. Tbh, the romance without romance is call of the night. Reincarnation without reincarnation is omniscient first person point of view and one other that I forgot the name of, and also you can't forget the Lord of the Mystery, if you know, you know. I can't help but say you are quite brilliant, maybe make some novel with these concepts. I'll certainly read it.
Ok, randomly remove romance from a romance novel and call it romance. Stupid right? Human form is human, not a dragon or a wolf, there’s no reason to do that in a specifically non-human novel unless you truly don’t care why your story is being read. Don’t reply to me after this, I’d rather not talk to a degenerat.
YellowNarwhale:I mean thanks. I feel like a story like that is sometimes too predictable. Your criticism of the story isn't really a criticism as it is part of the story development where the MC turned into a human. Not everyone will want to stay in a form that they are not used to, maybe only you I guess. Go write your own story, of course not for free, but I doubt a lot of people will buy it.