Review Detail of Coconut_Head in My Daughter is a Vampire

There are many grammatical mistakes such as missing words, wrong tenses, and weird word choice but you will be able to understand what the author is saying. Next point is that there isn’t much character description to the point where I have no idea what most characters look like. I only know that the daughter has silver hair and red eyes, thats it. There were maybe one or two line descriptions for Brian and Charlotte, but the author never describes them again after their introduction. The world building and the plot development is interesting with some good mysteries tho